Here are some of mine
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Here are some of mine
Roe December 6th 2008, 3:18 am
I do like to write. More than others, less that a lot of others. lol. I'll throw up a new thread, each with 3 pieces in it. I'll do that like, every 2 weeks or so as to not flood the forum. Some of the things I write can hit home for people. I have been told that my work sucks, depresses people, and ((in one instance)) kept them from suicide because they saw how stupid it would be to do so for the reason they had in mind. So, I warn you, if you don't want to read anything that could do any one of those things, do not read any farther.
~Aye, It Truly Is~
Time is really something.
Twisting and contorting reality.
Showing what is true
Through colors that are not.
Making shining examples of
Dull and long since dead veterans.
Lined, wrapped, sealed, and contained
Inside a vessel from which nothing escapes.
The truth behind the lies.
Holding onto what burns.
Shielding those you wish to love
From those you show love to.
A sense of duty before
Friendship lasts for a while
But is it enough to last the last mile?
Will strife be overcome?
Will the truth shine through
Colors that are faded to no more?
Only time will tell.
Time is really something.
~Words Too Late~
singing softly to himself
He sits quietly
Thinking and singing
Nothing more
Nothing less
Singing his frustrations
Singing his depressions
Thinking of his life
And the twisted humor
With which he's lived it
Sitting in the darkness
Mist swirling around him
Tears rolling from his eyes
The cold stone at his back
He can feel the engravings
You never knew how much I cared for you
Never saw how much I loved for you
Every day you saw me there
Every day I saw your tears
Never once knowing my emotions
Never once showing you my heart
Here I stay every night and day
Waiting for you to see my endless fear
Sitting in his darkness
The mist swirling around him
Tears falling to his lap
Engravings to his back
He can tell how much they cared
Sitting here in my darkness
With the mist swiriling around me
Singing my heart out to the growing light
giving voice to my frustrations
Letting my depression known
Sitting against this stone
Waiting for your lovely face
I wait once more
Sitting in the growing light
Mist retreating away from him
Tears hitting the grass
He can tell how much they cared
If only they cared before she died.
I must them once more
Showing a smile we know is fake
Hiding my rolling tears
And my growing fears
And even while I know I won't see you again
I wish I could once more
If only to tell you I loved you
Before time ran out
Until once more I'll join you here
I leave you with words to late
I love you from the bottom of my heart
Sitting in the growing light
As he walks away
The grass raises once more
She can tell how much he cared
For even in the grave, She loves him still.
~Melting Pictures~
Long sought after thoughts
Images carefully made
Never stop workin
Mask always showin
Puttin up a front
To discourage depression
Plastered smiles fade away
Giving tears room to flow
Falling in silent anticipation
Waiting for others to join their ranks
Feeling the picture peel away
sliding down below your norm
Trying to keep the hardened face
Twisting and contorting on the inside
Bleeding within your mind
Scolding yourself for errors made
Condemning your soul in light of forgiveness
Never allowing room for error
But making all the mistakes
Putting up a front
While plastered smiles fade away
~Aye, It Truly Is~
Time is really something.
Twisting and contorting reality.
Showing what is true
Through colors that are not.
Making shining examples of
Dull and long since dead veterans.
Lined, wrapped, sealed, and contained
Inside a vessel from which nothing escapes.
The truth behind the lies.
Holding onto what burns.
Shielding those you wish to love
From those you show love to.
A sense of duty before
Friendship lasts for a while
But is it enough to last the last mile?
Will strife be overcome?
Will the truth shine through
Colors that are faded to no more?
Only time will tell.
Time is really something.
~Words Too Late~
singing softly to himself
He sits quietly
Thinking and singing
Nothing more
Nothing less
Singing his frustrations
Singing his depressions
Thinking of his life
And the twisted humor
With which he's lived it
Sitting in the darkness
Mist swirling around him
Tears rolling from his eyes
The cold stone at his back
He can feel the engravings
You never knew how much I cared for you
Never saw how much I loved for you
Every day you saw me there
Every day I saw your tears
Never once knowing my emotions
Never once showing you my heart
Here I stay every night and day
Waiting for you to see my endless fear
Sitting in his darkness
The mist swirling around him
Tears falling to his lap
Engravings to his back
He can tell how much they cared
Sitting here in my darkness
With the mist swiriling around me
Singing my heart out to the growing light
giving voice to my frustrations
Letting my depression known
Sitting against this stone
Waiting for your lovely face
I wait once more
Sitting in the growing light
Mist retreating away from him
Tears hitting the grass
He can tell how much they cared
If only they cared before she died.
I must them once more
Showing a smile we know is fake
Hiding my rolling tears
And my growing fears
And even while I know I won't see you again
I wish I could once more
If only to tell you I loved you
Before time ran out
Until once more I'll join you here
I leave you with words to late
I love you from the bottom of my heart
Sitting in the growing light
As he walks away
The grass raises once more
She can tell how much he cared
For even in the grave, She loves him still.
~Melting Pictures~
Long sought after thoughts
Images carefully made
Never stop workin
Mask always showin
Puttin up a front
To discourage depression
Plastered smiles fade away
Giving tears room to flow
Falling in silent anticipation
Waiting for others to join their ranks
Feeling the picture peel away
sliding down below your norm
Trying to keep the hardened face
Twisting and contorting on the inside
Bleeding within your mind
Scolding yourself for errors made
Condemning your soul in light of forgiveness
Never allowing room for error
But making all the mistakes
Putting up a front
While plastered smiles fade away
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen December 12th 2008, 3:09 am
i like these.
those are the exact reasons why i have yet to post any of mine.
you put me to shame.
how long have you been into writing poems for?
those are the exact reasons why i have yet to post any of mine.
you put me to shame.
how long have you been into writing poems for?
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Re: Here are some of mine
Roe December 12th 2008, 11:17 am
Honey, poems are supposed to bring emotions to the surface. They're supposed to help people feel things. Lol. The only reasons I gave warnings is because I made is a rule to warn people and because of the type of memories some of my writing may bring up.
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen February 24th 2009, 4:23 am
this is true.
that is what poems are supposed to do and as the writer of the poems you do it very well!!
that is what poems are supposed to do and as the writer of the poems you do it very well!!
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Re: Here are some of mine
Roe February 24th 2009, 5:55 pm
Thank you. I take that as a positive and negative thing. Lol
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen February 25th 2009, 7:55 am
negative?
how so?
it was meant to be only a GOOD compliment!
lol
take it that way!
how so?
it was meant to be only a GOOD compliment!
lol
take it that way!
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Re: Here are some of mine
Roe February 25th 2009, 2:45 pm
Oh I know it was meant as a good one babes.
I like and dislike the fact that I stir up those memories.
I like and dislike the fact that I stir up those memories.
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen February 26th 2009, 4:17 am
o really?
well then im sorry that you stir those memories.
well then im sorry that you stir those memories.
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Re: Here are some of mine
Roe February 26th 2009, 3:24 pm
Don't be babes. Tis my fault for writing like that. Lol
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen February 27th 2009, 8:07 am
lol
you act like its a bad thing that you write in that tone!
i dont think it is!
you act like its a bad thing that you write in that tone!
i dont think it is!
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Re: Here are some of mine
Roe February 28th 2009, 2:53 am
Neither do I. I just don't like the fact that I'm able to arise those types of feelings. It's not what I write for. I write to release my feelings. My worries. Frustrations and vices.
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen March 2nd 2009, 6:59 am
well as long as you do that then i dont see a problem
do you?
do you?
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen March 5th 2009, 6:17 am
it was wierd to see your typing in black!
lol
good,im glad you didnt put up an arguement!
lol
good,im glad you didnt put up an arguement!
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen March 5th 2009, 8:22 am
i see....
its the old age kickin' in!!!
lol
im just kidding.....
I Love you.
its the old age kickin' in!!!
lol
im just kidding.....
I Love you.
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen March 5th 2009, 8:33 am
well then i hall share with you some of my youthfullness!!
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen March 6th 2009, 8:49 am
And how do you suppose that i should go about sharing this youthfullness?
I know of one way but i dont know if you can keep up!
lol
I know of one way but i dont know if you can keep up!
lol
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Re: Here are some of mine
Roe March 7th 2009, 2:43 am
Heh, MY keeping up shouldn't be an issue. What should be the issue here is whether or not your youthful mind has the imagination to keep up with mine......
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen March 7th 2009, 8:17 am
youthfullness equals creativeness!!
i think that you got a little tase of how creative i can tend to get.
wait until its in person!!
lol
*wink wink*
i think that you got a little tase of how creative i can tend to get.
wait until its in person!!
lol
*wink wink*
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Re: Here are some of mine
Roe March 7th 2009, 4:18 pm
-shivers a lot-
OMG little girl. You are SO going to get it when we has time alone.
OMG little girl. You are SO going to get it when we has time alone.
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Re: Here are some of mine
Rayleen March 8th 2009, 7:21 am
i love the reaction i get from you.
it makes me feel like i am doing my job right.
now as long as we can actually get alone then my job can become very solidly done!!
it makes me feel like i am doing my job right.
now as long as we can actually get alone then my job can become very solidly done!!
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